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Picnic On a Rainy Day

Lush stubby grass bends and sways A perfect place to spend our day Forever, it is spread, beneath our feet Green carpet as far as the eye can see Encompassing silence with its prickly touch The sky so blue, with touch of gray Appears to enjoy a game it plays Gathering clouds that tease the sun Who darts, and hides between each one He sends a yellow ship that sails, Upon a sea of flowering hills We spread our blanket under the trees And marvel at the fickle breeze It takes a turn, from hot to warm It soothes the brow, then cools us down, We lunch with wine, French bread and cheese Big apples, grapes, of red and green We nap among the shady groves Awakenend by the scent of rain A run for cover beneath a bridge We laugh like children, once again And like ripples on a silent stream.. Dripping songs, and unuttered words Sweet music is played.... new memories are heard For Carol Brown's contest "Picnic Time"

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Date: 5/20/2011 11:27:00 PM
wow, what a romantic rainy picnic scene. Enchanting, Carrie! Congratulations, Again!!
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:54:00 AM
I remember this one well, Carrie. Great work! Congratulations on your win in Carol's Picnic Contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:44:00 AM
Excellent poetry on picnic, Carrie..Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poetic work..love, gautami
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:55:00 PM
Carrie, so great to see you on the winner's list with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:23:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your win in the contest of Carol...
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Date: 5/18/2011 10:23:00 AM
Nice memories here! Loved the end! Running in the rain! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/18/2011 9:42:00 AM
I still think this is lovely. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:04:00 AM
bring it on, carrie.. a heartwarming piece with my best of cheers for a fine win.:) huggs
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Carrie. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:05:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Carrie
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:55:00 AM
carrie this is great congrats on your win! cory
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:09:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your terrific win in the picnic contest with yet another delightful write my friend.. enjoy your well deserved top ten sweet success with luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/14/2011 7:46:00 PM
why does it always rain when we are having a picnic. this was a great piece, enjoyed it.
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Date: 5/14/2011 4:59:00 PM
What a delightful and memorable picnic picture you've painted here Carrie-- yes that rain could very well be the perfect ending for this fun picnic :) Love how you describe this scene so well-- you've always shone with your imagery :) Happy Sunday to you :) hugs your way Carrie :)
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Date: 5/14/2011 12:32:00 PM
How I love that last line, Carrie! You always amaze me with your descriptive imagery and this poem is so vividly conveyed. I felt like I was right ther with you. And at least you had a chance to eat before the rain came. Ironically, it's fixing to rain here now. The palms are swaying in the sea breeze. Great entry for Carol's contest. Winning wishes coming your way! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/13/2011 8:46:00 PM
How nice! What a beautiful write, it was easy to picture this picnic time! Good luck in the contest. And thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 5/13/2011 8:41:00 PM
good luck in the contest,,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/13/2011 7:36:00 PM
Very beautiful visuals in this piece Carrie.. much success in Carol's contest .. rain has dampened some of our family reunion picnics but still fun was had.. good luck..
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Date: 5/13/2011 7:04:00 PM
Fun picnic poem Carrie. I have been wanting to enter this one but cannot get started writing. I am visiting and helping with my brother for a week and working a little from his computer. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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