Pickles

sour pickles make me sick all it takes is just one lick dare, not truth, is what I pick now I fear I will feel ick to ease the torture, my nose I clip lifting a green fiend to my lip blah! Yuck! Would taste improve with spice? or perhaps chill the beasts on ice? to honour my dare, I fight down a slice all the while hoping, my rival gets lice 05/23/12 For Catie Lindsey's CONTEST: Word Games

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/10/2024 8:36:00 PM

Today, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 11:03:00 PM

WELL DONE

David Scott

Date: 1/11/2013 12:35:00 PM

LOVE IT MATE COOL VERSE XXDAVIDSCOTT

Dan Kearley

Date: 5/23/2012 11:51:00 PM

Diana,do you really hate pickles that much? Ha,ha...Good luck in the contest. :o)

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/23/2012 7:13:00 PM

LMAO!!!!!Vie this is tooo tooo funny!! Well Done my friend! best winning wishes! love ya, deb

Diana-Marie Bombardieri
Date: 5/23/2012 8:44:00 PM

this is actually her daughter;) Diana. Thanks for thinking my poem was funny:)

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/23/2012 5:42:00 PM

Ha ha, this is quite the funny write! I really enjoyed your delightful and magnificent little poem! You did excellent with this write! You'll do well in the contest! Great Work!!