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Picking Pretty Flowers

Picking pretty flowers without any vase matching painted stories to a perfect little face empty out barrels full of apprehension and crush the bits of dystopia lying underneath Through hallowed halls hold on strong fixate on skewed linen flows un-swirled tinted in shades of blue and green yell out side by side and be seen You don't have to carry dusty records or be a whisper in the breeze take my hand anchoring our astral ceiling and wander away with me *Another poem inspired by a painting on my wall

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Date: 1/13/2017 6:40:00 PM
Your paintings are very inspirational, I will say THAT! I especially liked that last verse!
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Date: 1/13/2017 11:13:00 AM
That painting is beautiful!
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Date: 1/12/2017 11:22:00 AM
- A lovely bouquet of flowers, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/12/2017 1:36:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend.
Date: 1/12/2017 9:32:00 AM
Exceptional art work through your beautiful words Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/12/2017 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Charmu...I think this painting has been money well spent....I love getting lost in it. smiles : )
Date: 1/12/2017 8:49:00 AM
Wow Tim, Very nice! It is neat to hear this is inspired by a painting. Well done :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/12/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thanks Heidi...I really get inspired by art, music, and natural beauty.
Date: 1/12/2017 8:06:00 AM
Beautifully written and expressed feelings Tim. Must be a gorgeous painting.
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Date: 1/12/2017 2:13:00 PM
http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/my_alyssum_853841
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/12/2017 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Chris...I have it posted on one of my poems...I'll have to check

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