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Picking Flowers Morphed

In the fields as she picks flowers Beauty compounds within the scene She holds them hearing their powers In the fields she picks her flowers They never did seem at all sour Her soul holds them dear as she’s seen In the fields as she picks flowers Beauty compounds within the scene
Russell Sivey Form Triolet
The power of the flowers is extreme It is beautiful to behold their sight The flowers shine amongst the lovely scene Season comes just once, flowers are its right The blooms are brilliant with its color show The flowers don’t look dull they are alright Her soul houses these flowers which she knows Immense are their powers when they are seen The flowers sway as the wind surely blows The power of the flowers are extreme The flowers shine amongst the lovely scene
Russell Sivey Form Terza Rima Entered into Debbie Guzzi's "Metamorph" contest 3/26/2013

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  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:05:00 PM
    Russell, Congratulations :-) In Debbie's "Metamorph" contest. always~ PD

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 10:58:00 AM
    Beautiful write Russell... Congrats on your win~A.O

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 7:08:00 PM
    Beautiful poem Russell, congrats on your win :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 4:50:00 PM
    Way to go Russell, congratulations.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Your knowledge and use of forms is growing by leaps and bounds! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 10:59:00 AM
    Congratulation Russell, happy they are appreciating your poems. Love Terry xoxo

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 10:19:00 AM
    Many congratulations Russell , well done xx

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 5:51:00 AM
    Very good job with this one. I see a lot of change, yet it is in a subtle way the same poem. I like the wording changes with more description and colour added.

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 12:40:00 PM
    Reads like an interesting contest..Good luck as you go..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 8:41:00 AM
    Living flowers is one thing.luving des poem is another.i simply luv has a fragrance.

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Russell.....I don't know what form you are talking about but the image of this poem is gorgeous......donna