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Piano Chords

Preposterous melody won't exist, Inside a piano without the chord's beat Aubade is formed when dolefulness emits Nails the body to where she always sits; Ordering her fingers to start a writ. Corners her world with piano as a friend Heaves fro the melancholia life has sent Obsolete in the past yet still remains Rest in the hands of the hellion of dents Deceiving the chords life composed to mend Carted away from the womb of thy mom, Dispatched to fosters as a surly wan Ego disappears to the children's scrum For years she can't find her ruined life's sum Guided and loved with the help of the rank An afflatus for three hearts to collide But deep beneath, she had always been mock Called in by her fosters as out of luck Door to door, she lagged capitulated Reminds herself the poem she narrated Misses the time her heart elevated Falls for a man who's crossed-dressing blended Solitude before but now chaperoned Laminated by her man's trifle tone Timbre has echoed when they broke the stone Do you hear the sixteen chords of her song?

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Date: 3/23/2016 12:16:00 PM
Nice to read this one again, Denise. LINDA
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Date: 2/1/2016 11:27:00 PM
I literally just created a profile to comment on your poem! I loved it, between the wonderfully crafted imagery and the little message you left for an attentive reader. Thanks for the poem and definitely continue to write!
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Date: 2/9/2014 3:11:00 PM
"Carted away from the womb of thy mom, Dispatched to fosters as a surly wan Ego disappears to the children's scrum For years she can't find her ruined life's sum" A very nice verse. Keep writing.
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Denise L.M
Date: 2/28/2014 2:20:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very nice comment. I am deeply fluttered and overwhelmed.
Date: 1/25/2014 10:37:00 AM
Denise, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Denise L.M
Date: 1/31/2014 12:04:00 AM
Thank you all so much for your warm welcome. I have no doubt in joining this happy family. Trust me. Take care too. Hugs and kisses, Denise.
Date: 1/25/2014 7:34:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Denise - I choose your first nice written poem - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Denise L.M
Date: 1/31/2014 12:00:00 AM
Thank you so much for your warm welcome and fluttering comment. Yes, I wanna be friends with someone like you. Hahaha! Funny, I finally have an older sister, though, we're not actually blood related.
Date: 1/25/2014 2:02:00 AM
Denise, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Denise L.M
Date: 1/31/2014 12:37:00 AM
So glad to be a friends with you. Again, thank you so much.
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Denise L.M
Date: 1/30/2014 11:56:00 PM
... I don't know how. Anyway, let's be friend aight.
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Denise L.M
Date: 1/30/2014 11:41:00 PM
Thank you for your warm welcome and fluttering compliment. As much as I wanted to tell you about myself

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