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Physical Explosions

A sense a smell a vision, Caught on my mind Trapped in my skin, and it wants more Craving to touch kiss and embrace Magnetic attraction to your lips, I want more need more crave for more. Im falling deeply madly in your storms of emotions. And you: You Lift me up like a helpless leaf in a hurricane, but I'm not afraid. You are an adventure, exciting adventure ,my hands want to explore. my touch to your body is smooth , hot like lava wandering up and down your volcanic body. And I'm waiting for this explosion. This soul shaking mind taking explosion I hope you sense it I hope you feel it I'm burning burning for you u

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Date: 2/25/2015 9:10:00 AM
my first thought after reading your poem was it gave me the sense of a sparrow flying into a storm, determined to find its calm eye..well done my poetic friend
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/25/2015 1:32:00 PM
What a nice description to my description!! Made me look at it in a new perspective but yet similar to it. Thank you frederic

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