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mom's frail fingers wiping teardrops from father's smiling face.... **It was my father's death anniversary.... © 2011 kashinath karmakar (8th September 2011) =================================== Placement:2nd;(September 2011) Contest:Write it in one Line,Please Sponsor:Constance La France =================================== Placement: 1st;(September 2011) Contest:Verse any Theme/Form maxm.8 lines. Sponsor:Brian Strand ===================================

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/30/2011 7:58:00 PM

POWERFUL as was the gesture as she did it ;) congrad's dear wish you still had him! Light & Love

Don Johnson

Date: 9/30/2011 6:32:00 PM

Yes mate, i miss my dad too, great poem here, gets the emotions, just a bit, here...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2011 6:31:00 PM

Congrats on your winning emotive work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/30/2011 11:38:00 AM

Congrats Kash on first place win with these brilliant and beautiful words my friend..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2011 9:59:00 AM

Good morning and congratulations on your 1st Place win in Brian's "Verse" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Afroze Ali

Date: 9/11/2011 11:40:00 AM

congratulations Kashinath for your win, this is a very touching poem.

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/11/2011 12:11:00 AM

Excellent! I just love this poem, so touching. Great win, congratulations. Lee

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/10/2011 7:15:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest with this emotional monoku...

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/10/2011 4:55:00 PM

placement congratulations for your win in the "Write it in one line, Please" contest. CR

Jack Horne

Date: 9/10/2011 10:53:00 AM

Many congrats for all your wins, Kash : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2011 8:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Write It In On Line, Please" contest. A very well deserved placement Kashinath. Love, Carol

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/10/2011 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonder win!!!!!!!----Lori

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/10/2011 3:12:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance,kashi

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/10/2011 12:01:00 AM

CONGRATS KASH ON SECOND PLACE WIN WITH THIS DYNAMIC MONOKU LUV..

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 9/9/2011 8:09:00 PM

Kash that is sure powerful-said well is so few words-congrats. to you!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/9/2011 8:00:00 PM

very real, touching..we have been there and will be again, congrad's light & love

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/9/2011 1:18:00 AM

Emotive--I bet you had tissues in hand as soon as you pushed the "send" button. Respectful tones of a son's love of parents. Another winner. Gwendolen

Kash Poet
Date: 9/9/2011 5:49:00 AM

thanks Gwen.This is a scene from my father's death anniversary.My maa was shedding tears while watching the photo album....kash

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2011 10:11:00 PM

AWESOME. NOw you got it!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/8/2011 4:25:00 PM

oh so sweet and sensitive.. an emotional visual my friend... this will touch Constance deeply as I .. good luck luv...

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/8/2011 3:07:00 PM

What a perfect visualization! Great picture painted by a great artist! You will do well in the contest!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/8/2011 1:54:00 PM

This is a definite winner or my name isn't Wilma Kash ;)Absolutely love this! Good luck to you and thank you for your comment on my virgin attempt of the Pantoum lol.. Lfde Wilma

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/8/2011 1:53:00 PM

Well done my friend...CR

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/8/2011 1:44:00 PM

from wiping to smiling... greeat job, kashi; sheer delight!! winning's best, yeah!..:) huggs, nette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/8/2011 12:59:00 PM

So expressive and emotive work..Reads lik a winner...Your presence at my work is very uplifting..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2011 10:20:00 AM

Kash, hurry and put it all in one line!! Look at the title of the contest! I LOVE this one of yours and you put it up same time as me!! I've got only ten minutes to post another poem and get out the door. Woe is me. I never even did half my shoulder exercises this morning. I"m so bad!!!