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Phoenix Departs

And then, the angel shouted, their ears perked Those waiting shouted, “We are gathered here ~ hiding.” "The tales are true, dear majesty, and we doubted." And, with a wisp, they, and the pheonix departed Note: I would consider this poem to be Urdu ©2016 Bonnie Jennings

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Date: 6/7/2016 8:21:00 PM
Exactly... very shayari like... in the wake of reading , I almost exclaimed : keys baat ! how beautiful...
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Bonnie Jennings
Date: 6/7/2016 9:16:00 PM
My goodness! Thank you so much! I'm so appreciative of your comment.

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