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Phoebe

Proud of my red coat, that others admired, or was it the charm and wit I had, that they desired? I spent my days basking in the noon-day sun; you scolded me for stealing the worker’s lunch, I did it, just for fun! You gave me a world where I was free to roam; through woods and fields until you called me home. I know there were times, you did not take pleasure, in the prizes I returned with, that I deeply treasured. I protected you from strangers, with my gnarly bark; you let me play at night, chasing frogs and dodging owls, in the dark. You dressed me up and I paraded all around; I knew I was the life of every party, a miniature, ten pound hound. I was grateful for your tender care, through my golden years; I left you with a heavy heart, and eyes, filled with tears. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In memory of Phoebe Leda Rose our miniature dachshund. Born May 1998 died Feb. 2013. She truly was a lively and affectionate dog. The poem reflects her quirky personality that kept us laughing. We purchased Phoebe for our 10 year old daughter who cherished her and wrote a poem about her for school. Phoebe Leda Rose has very big nose She wobbles when she walks And she wiggles her toes. Date: June 2, 2022 For: Personification – Pets Talking Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance LaFrance Rhyme verified on rhymezone.com Placed 1st in contest

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Date: 7/5/2022 10:31:00 AM
Paulette, such an emotional poem and beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win in my contest, blessings ~ Constance
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Date: 7/1/2022 11:37:00 AM
Great tribute. Congratulations!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/2/2022 10:07:00 AM
Christuraj, thanks for stopping by to comment. Phoebe was a delightful dog, we never could replace. :)Paulette
Date: 7/1/2022 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Phoebe" is a Wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 7/2/2022 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula. She was a delightful little dog...we could never replace. :)Paulette
Date: 6/6/2022 3:16:00 PM
Nice tribute poem, Paulette. Your daughter writes well also. :-) Bill
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/6/2022 4:32:00 PM
Thanks, Bill~ Phoebe was quite a character....glad you enjoyed the poem. :)Paulette
Date: 6/5/2022 9:56:00 AM
Phoebe must have been a constant delight. Your poem was delightful to read, Paulette. Have a nice day, Evelyn :)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/5/2022 3:25:00 PM
She sure was a delight. Glad you enjoyed the poem. :)Paulette
Date: 6/4/2022 5:15:00 PM
This is so precious Paulette. Your daughter will always have this poem to remember her pet by as well as her own poem. I am so happy you posted her poem. I have a 10 year old granddaughter who is beginning to write her own poetry and I encourage that so much. You must be proud of your daughter’s poem. I love that we can influence our children into loving the arts. I am sorry for your loss. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/5/2022 5:04:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Connie. Yes, encouraging our young to express themselves through poetry and art is a gift they will carry for a lifetime and pass on to the future generations. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 6/4/2022 3:21:00 PM
oh wow, this is so poignant. I love this, paulette.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/4/2022 3:40:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed this~Phoebe was a real character~it was easy to write about her. Enjoy the weekend! :)Paulette
Date: 6/3/2022 10:41:00 PM
Enjoyed the poem. Best for a win.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/4/2022 4:46:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Victor. Have a nice day. :)Paulette
Date: 6/3/2022 5:31:00 PM
Beautifully penned paragon, Paulette, including your daughter's afterwords. All the best my friend, Aloha~William
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/4/2022 4:47:00 AM
Thanks so much for comments~I will let my daughter know her school day poem was a hit too! :)Paulette
Date: 6/3/2022 5:19:00 PM
Enjoyed the poem about your little doggie.Pretty name Phoebe LEDA Rose.How did it come about?
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/4/2022 4:46:00 AM
Hi Vickey~Thanks for stopping by to comment on “Phoebe”~her name came about because my daughter thought she looked like a Phoebe and the person who we purchased it from was LEDA , while ROSE was for Rose in the movie the Titanic. Now you have the story. Glad you enjoyed the poem. :)Paulette
Date: 6/3/2022 5:05:00 PM
Such a sweet poem about your precious pet. They really do entertain us in all their funny ways. Best, SuZ
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/3/2022 5:07:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne~indeed they do keep us entertained! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 6/3/2022 10:22:00 AM
Awe, such a touching write.. I love my dog as well... Good luck in Constance's contest. Blessing friend
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/3/2022 10:30:00 AM
Thank you Eve~she was an exceptional little dog we never got another. Blessings,Paulette
Date: 6/3/2022 10:11:00 AM
what a wonderful personification poem, you were so lucky to have happy years together and your daughters poem is charming xx
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/3/2022 10:31:00 AM
Thanks Jan~ yes, we had many wonderful years, she made everyday exciting. Thanks for stopping by to visit and comment. :)Paulette

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