Phased

The moon took possession of the sky a blank slate of atmospheric haze punctuating the seasonal sentence of solar cycling.

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Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 10/29/2009 11:45:00 AM

the seasonal sentence of solar cycling sounds so soothing to my soft senses:) did that get a chuckle out of you wise one? I'll have to try harder if not. May I ask what does the moon mean to you spiritually? I'm a bit mystefied by it myself but I can never piece it together.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 5:57:00 PM

I love this one Deborah! I've seen that beautiful seasonal moon peeking through the night haze. And you have said it very well! Be happy, my friend. Lovingly, Dane

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2009 12:18:00 PM

I enjoyed reading you poem today Deborah. The moon is always so beautiful. Thank you for sharing your write. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2009 5:24:00 AM

The beauty of the night sky. I don't get to see it much because I am a day person but occasionaly I go on the porch to see the stars. Last night I saw the early moon before it actually got dark it is in the stage of filling back up with just a crescent. I wondered where the sun was shining in other parts of the world that was casting the glow on the moon. Glad that you wrote this one. Sara