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In dreamscape teeming with mirage this soul an unwilling captive, afloat with black moon's entourage In dreamscape teeming with mirage through a strangely bizarre collage-- wake me O real hours active In dreamscape teeming with mirage... this soul an unwilling captive! )) Pick-A-Title, Vol 24- Triolet-Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh 11/02/2020

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2021 6:19:00 PM

And now I’m a captive held within the spaces between your words. Blessings Rick.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/13/2020 1:33:00 PM

Your Triolet transmits the essence of a phantasmagoria, Nette. Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/13/2020 11:41:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this excellent triolet, Nette:-)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/13/2020 7:07:00 AM

Excellent WINNING triolet, Nette! Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2020 6:27:00 AM

Congrats on your winner. Way to go. I hope this soul gets set free. SK

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2020 2:30:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Watt

Date: 11/12/2020 10:04:00 PM

I think I might have a nightmare tonight! Just kidding, but you did a great job making this spooky, Nette. Congratulations on your win ~ John

Eve Roper

Date: 11/12/2020 9:36:00 PM

Congratulations , Nette, on the win!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/12/2020 5:37:00 PM

Dark one Nette - Congratulations on the win! Linda

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/12/2020 3:12:00 PM

Hi Nette, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2020 3:08:00 PM

excellent rhyming lines, dear nette. Thanks for my win in your contest and best wishes in this triolet contest.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/3/2020 10:01:00 AM

Nette, I was willingly captured in your creative collage as it teems with dark poetic beauty. Your expressive pen spills a dreamscape of golden imagery. Best wishes for a win, dear poetess.. ~Susan

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/3/2020 2:05:00 AM

Illusions galore, so well composed. Should do well in the contest. ~~

Lyva Marty

Date: 11/2/2020 7:26:00 PM

Visually, psychologically arresting. A phantasm piercing the senses, Nette!