Petrified

It's cold It's dark It's lonely It's petrifying Being alive I mean Everything would be so much easier if I was just dead Maybe one day Maybe sometime Maybe soon I don't want this anymore I'm weak Oh so weak And I don't know how much longer I can do this on my own I mean there's nobody else So why not....

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Eric Boddie

Date: 10/5/2015 8:39:00 PM

there is always someone else....and He Is God, Himself....no matter our fear, no matter our problem....He Is The One Who Can Clearly Solve Them....;)

Skat A

Date: 10/2/2015 12:40:00 AM

Snow, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2015 3:01:00 PM

Snow Smokler, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@