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I stand amid deep blue water and in my dream the wind roars within my hand are rose petals each one so special and unique and I let them go in the breeze from my hand they go drifting while I weep, weep for them why did I not hold them tighter those petals in the roaring wind they are so many of my loved ones oh, do take these tears with you take my forever love up to heaven God could I have not kept one just one of those precious rose petals but all I have are sweet memories and now the petals are drifting in the wind __________________________ December 12, 2015 Free Verse/"petals in the wind" Copyright Protected, ID 737043 End of October Standard Contest Brian Strand First Place __________________________ Written for the contest, Poems Time Forgot Silent One Third Place

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Date: 12/22/2015 4:49:00 PM
Congrats on 3rd place win!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2015 5:20:00 PM
Thank you Susan for the congrats
Date: 12/22/2015 3:22:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your win. WUV **SKAT**
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Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2015 4:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Skat ~
Date: 12/22/2015 11:46:00 AM
Congrats for the wonderful poem to win. Best wishes. Anisha D
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Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2015 4:28:00 PM
Anisha, thanks for the congrats and the wonderful ~
Date: 12/22/2015 6:33:00 AM
Touching Constance love this one heartfelt and one of my favorites. Thank you for sharing. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2015 4:29:00 PM
Michael, thanks so much for the nice comment and the congratulations ~
Date: 12/21/2015 12:35:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful
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Constance La France
Date: 12/21/2015 1:04:00 AM
Arthur, oh I love that word beautiful, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 12/20/2015 10:53:00 PM
touching and beautiful (like you are) Merry Christmas dear, all the best in the New Year
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Constance La France
Date: 12/21/2015 1:06:00 AM
Francine, so nice to have a visit from you, and thanks for the comment, and seasons greetings to you also.
Date: 12/20/2015 3:55:00 PM
I always think of petals as being confetti from heaven - absolutely beautiful as ever Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/20/2015 4:03:00 PM
can you reply to my mail asap: please:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 12/20/2015 4:00:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the nice comment on the beautiful ~
Date: 12/20/2015 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful Broken Wings..perfectly said..*smiles*
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Constance La France
Date: 12/20/2015 4:01:00 PM
Laura, thanks so much for the beautiful and the smiles ~

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