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Petals In The Wind

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Petals In The Wind

Petals in the wind
Wish to be with you today
Dancing in the sky
It’s like raining of magic
Feels my spirit soar up high

On a starry night
Surrendering our lost souls
Cleanse by your beauty
My contented heart rejoiced 
Color of happiness you bring

Life is really good
Floating to the world of dreams
Take us anywhere
Balancing our own with faith
And let God works in ourselves 

January 25, 2013

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  1. Date: 2/3/2013 5:06:00 PM
    I like this one also..It is a very expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 11:20:00 AM
    A fanciful and imaginative write.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 11:36:00 PM
    what a nice poem on petals in the wind. I like how you did it in tanka form.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Maria a very nice Tanka. It flowed so easily, light and airy read. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:46:00 AM
    A very wonderful tanka giving me a very wonderful feeling and images my dearest friend Maria! Great write indeed! I extremely love it. Thank you so much for sharing and your inspiring comments on my poems. Good luck and wish you all the best always! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:32:00 AM
    Wonderful poem dear:) wish you luck:) Thanks for your comments on my poems...Sadaf

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 3:30:00 PM
    lovely write indeed - congrats on your wins, my friend

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 9:12:00 AM
    A gentle peaceful write... loved it!, my friend! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 9:07:00 PM
    Hi Lovely, Maria, love the rain magic... your poem makes me want to fly with the wind with all the colorful colors kicking in... love it... hope to see you read my latest poem... I decided to give it a go again... xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 11:04:00 AM
    A fantastic and wondrous write my friend! - I truly enjoyed reading this fine lovely poem this afternoon! - Well written ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 1/25/2013 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    many2 thanks to you my friend Anne Lise for a very nice comments. Have a blessed day always!! :)
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 6:32:00 AM
    Hi there this is lovely and I love your line 'colour of happiness you bring' xx

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 1/25/2013 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    so much thanks my dear Mandy for stopping by...I highly appreciate it :) Good day!! :)