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Petals In the Wind

Petals in the wind Wish to be with you today Dancing in the sky It’s like raining of magic Feels my spirit soar up high On a starry night Surrendering our lost souls Cleanse by your beauty My contented heart rejoiced Color of happiness you bring Life is really good Floating to the world of dreams Take us anywhere Balancing our own with faith And let God works in ourselves January 25, 2013

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2013 5:06:00 PM

I like this one also..It is a very expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/3/2013 11:20:00 AM

A fanciful and imaginative write.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2013 11:36:00 PM

what a nice poem on petals in the wind. I like how you did it in tanka form.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 1/29/2013 2:51:00 PM

Maria a very nice Tanka. It flowed so easily, light and airy read. Warm Smiles, Connie

Len Gasun

Date: 1/28/2013 9:46:00 AM

A very wonderful tanka giving me a very wonderful feeling and images my dearest friend Maria! Great write indeed! I extremely love it. Thank you so much for sharing and your inspiring comments on my poems. Good luck and wish you all the best always! love always, Leonora

Sadaf Syed

Date: 1/27/2013 12:32:00 AM

Wonderful poem dear:) wish you luck:) Thanks for your comments on my poems...Sadaf

Jack Horne

Date: 1/26/2013 3:30:00 PM

lovely write indeed - congrats on your wins, my friend

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/26/2013 9:12:00 AM

A gentle peaceful write... loved it!, my friend! Hugs, Jack xox

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2013 9:07:00 PM

Hi Lovely, Maria, love the rain magic... your poem makes me want to fly with the wind with all the colorful colors kicking in... love it... hope to see you read my latest poem... I decided to give it a go again... xox~LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2013 11:04:00 AM

A fantastic and wondrous write my friend! - I truly enjoyed reading this fine lovely poem this afternoon! - Well written ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 1/25/2013 8:41:00 PM

many2 thanks to you my friend Anne Lise for a very nice comments. Have a blessed day always!! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/25/2013 6:32:00 AM

Hi there this is lovely and I love your line 'colour of happiness you bring' xx

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 1/25/2013 6:35:00 AM

so much thanks my dear Mandy for stopping by...I highly appreciate it :) Good day!! :)