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Petals In the Wind

She loves me, she loves me not Drifting gone one by one I pluck away my many thoughts Heart strings play scarlet skyward loft Are petals rose forever lost? So gentle into minstral wind Or a prisoner of love escaping off Thus, once, twice, thrice again How shall I ever know…? The person that you are Amid this whirlwind of to and fro In continued passions from afar Quell my heart from its bitter swell And allow true assurances to begin Appease the soft June petals fall To turn around in wayward winds Alas, upon their return, amends To this man of yearning Evermore than merely friends To accent the wildflowers blooming By Michael G. Smith 2013

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Date: 4/19/2016 6:06:00 AM
You haven't been on in forever Michael... Hope to see you post one day again...Linda
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Date: 2/3/2013 6:45:00 PM
a beautiful one and a well deserved win for you. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/3/2013 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Michael xx
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Date: 2/2/2013 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!! :)
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:17:00 AM
Michael, this is just so lovely !! I remember pulling the petals of flower, with he loves me, he loves me not...sweet memories of youth you have brought to bare for me today. Thanks and congrats on your win..
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Date: 2/1/2013 2:04:00 AM
'I pluck away my many thoughts'...wow, what a line, what a poem..congratulations - Tim
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Date: 1/31/2013 9:13:00 PM
Michael, Lovel what you did with these petals.. the best picking of them all.. She loves me not's'''' Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD
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Date: 1/31/2013 6:18:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/31/2013 3:54:00 PM
Great poetic work..Enjoyed .Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/31/2013 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations Michael !! Beautifully done !! Bravo!! Huggss. Deb
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Date: 1/15/2013 3:33:00 PM
This is so sweet. I love it. The fourth stanza is beatiful. thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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