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Petals

Flowers open wide They ask to be provided At the end they close

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/17/2008 10:42:00 AM
Interesting use of this concise form. There is a lot in your words for the reader to think about. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 12/17/2008 6:22:00 AM
Very nice Haiku. The flowers coming alive then takinga rest. Loved it!
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Date: 12/16/2008 9:54:00 PM
Nice Haiku Matthew, great 5-7-5 flow. Welcome to poetry soup...Raul
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