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Pesky sun

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Pesky sun

Oh you pesky sun 
don't shine on me no more
let me wallow im my darkness
hide me from your warmth 
I've tried to hide beneath my 
and have pulled my covers 
still there always seems to be 
your rays that creep left and 
Let me run icy cold, let my 
pulse go sleep
let me writhe in agonizing 
darkness hides the madness in 
it I will lay 
perhaps in this cloak of 
I can finally forget your face

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  1. Date: 1/16/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Many a day I have been awakened by pesky sun...when my mind would rather rest. This poem and the other I read could be labeled as FreeVerse which will be read quicker than the label I don't know as form. You have talent, look forward to reading more from you.

    Barrera Avatar Ren Barrera
    Date: 1/16/2013 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for your input it is very much appreciated