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Person of Colour

Person of colour is coherently germane, He is never insane. Some things about this person of colour may seem strange, He is simple and he is yet to engage. This person of colour loves the critics, It is from them, he ticks. This person of colour is natural, And so, he is not a trial. This person of colour loves to exchange Ideas beyond his range. This person of colour loves keyboard, Tis with this he comes on board. This person of colour is a charcoal- a black beauty. This person of colour is me.

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Date: 5/26/2015 5:57:00 PM
Abdulhafeez, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/24/2013 8:33:00 AM
Congrats to you my friend. Your poem too is a beauty like you!!!
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/24/2013 9:23:00 AM
Thanks S. Nair
Date: 12/24/2013 12:38:00 AM
Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win, Abdul
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/24/2013 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Dr.
Date: 12/23/2013 2:37:00 PM
Congrats Abdulhafeez on your wonderful win! Excellent work here! Thanks for your participation. G
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/24/2013 9:20:00 AM
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/24/2013 9:18:00 AM
Thanks for my placement. Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Date: 12/5/2013 2:36:00 AM
Nice one. Yes, a beautiful black blood that flows in us.
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Date: 6/2/2013 7:40:00 AM
congrats on your win AO
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Date: 6/1/2013 1:58:00 PM
Abdulhafeez, Congratulations, with the poem and thoughts about YOU. LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/30/2013 10:04:00 PM
Lovely write, Abdulhafeez. I love people of color, as you put it. :) So does my daughter. I think she might marry one some day! What a lovely look into your life. Thanks for your visit.
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:36:00 PM
Abdulhafeez, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda
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Date: 4/23/2013 4:37:00 PM
Great work that Andrea has faved..Good to read this honored work..Sara
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Date: 4/21/2013 9:17:00 AM
This was really, really good my friend! I love your hook and how humble the tone of this was. Judging by your comments you seem like such and kind and lighthearted person... best of luck on the contest!
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Date: 4/21/2013 7:16:00 AM
You know what I see???? From your comments and the calmness of your face even with those dark glasses on i can see those kind eyes!!!!! Wonderful write friend....
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Date: 4/19/2013 5:37:00 PM
I like your self portrait very much. A fave for this one!
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Date: 4/19/2013 2:41:00 PM
'A charcoal-black beauty'...Perfect!...Very well done couplet, Abdulhafeez - Tim
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Date: 4/19/2013 2:20:00 PM
clever write - Congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 4/19/2013 10:05:00 AM
Abdulhafeez, not to be insane, is not quite the image of one LOL, however I love the simple way you clarify all the streamers in you. This makes me want slip all them ideas right from underneath your nose. ha ha, how clever you are. At the end, you added the best of your canvas upon my eyes. I'm glad to fall at the smiles and grin at the end of your verse. You are lovely *Always & Forever xox~PD
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:44:00 AM
wow! I love and adore the charcoal colour you paint about yourself. My eyes are gleaming with the best trickery in mind. This will be my newest and favorite poem. Adding the black beauty of you to my favorite list. Your newest fan LUV~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/19/2013 7:18:00 AM
I am happy to get to know the colors of you which I am sure are many. Unfortunately we live in a World that often makes judgements only based on what is seen on the surface. The color each of us is born with informs our perspective unless we move beyond the obvious to the essential which can only be revealed by looking within and below the surface. Race and color is important because it is the way we connect to our World. You have connected here with your words.
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Date: 4/19/2013 6:21:00 AM
I love the way you put this poem together. You say it like it is, Way to go. Have a great day. Please check out my poem ( Color Me ). ... Lucilla
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Date: 4/19/2013 5:55:00 AM
This is a wondrous and brilliant write Abdulhafeez! I enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What an awesome piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/19/2013 4:47:00 AM
BRAVO my friend! I love the couplet '...loves the critics, it is from them, he ticks.' A wonderful piece of self-affirmation. Best wishes, Keith
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