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Perpetual Poems

A poem is never merely still born, It has its creator's eyes,ears and nose Yet,unique it lives a life of its own Independent,well able to stand alone; On others it can,influence,affect Energise,direct or initiate A response,unforseen and immediate Or lie dormant,yet not dead,but waiting; Watered by another's mutual bond resurrected,to live again,again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/16/2010 9:39:00 AM
VERY NICE WRITE AND SO TRUE LOVED IT FALESHIA
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Date: 3/16/2010 3:57:00 AM
Yes, a poem once written that gets attention by being read over the years teaches, inspires, and touches the lives of many...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 3/15/2010 1:07:00 PM
I like to think most poems are like this! LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/15/2010 10:59:00 AM
I like it! Smiles. Dane Ann
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Date: 3/15/2010 5:53:00 AM
our words are alive, vibrational sound complex, white magic that allows us to thrive, black magic on me the thought it vex. awesome poem. pea's and love
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Date: 3/15/2010 5:53:00 AM
Perfection dear Brian.. living on in an eternity of reads... wonderful words ..deep but understandable .. poignant yet powerful... perpetual .. as a new fav..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/15/2010 5:35:00 AM
yes, so true, enjoyed this am--
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Date: 3/15/2010 5:28:00 AM
Well said. Have you noticed they don't always live the same life either, a new reader often brings a new interpretation of the poem, that is sometimes as interesting as the poem itself
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Date: 3/15/2010 3:40:00 AM
A deep truth you display here Brian, this one goes to my favorites...Raul
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Date: 3/15/2010 2:32:00 AM
I like what you have to say Brian - Expressed like a true poet - Thankyou for sharing such truths -:)
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