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Permutations of Logic

Permutations Of Logic The truth was concealed with many branches hidden through flossy blossoms unknown roots to be found holding swings charms and roundabouts from one single acorn to coax oak and seedlings once more Hiding hidden going gone oblivious and obviously sprouting gently again from unexpected twiglets’ bright side of the sun dark side of the moon meta-morphing the bigger picture of life offshoots veiled in mystery Some branches and ramifications were torn crumbled withered like an epitaph of that epic journey from womb to tomb a foreplay to afterthoughts hindsight glistening light playing shadows where candid veracity prevails The branches were concealed with many truths hidden through perceptions un-ventured thoughts to be exposed containing swings and roundabouts from one singular premise to conclusion and take off once more Camouflage Me A Poem contest - Theme used: The Truth Was Concealed With Many Branches 08th August 2016

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Anthony Mark

Date: 8/13/2016 4:36:00 AM

Though a wordy write, and formatted well, I don't really understand the message or the hook..? It's a very sterile impersonal write, that seems to push away rather than engage,....the write itself is clever if studied, so well done for me hat, but readers sometimes want to relate on a personal level! ...Ian

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/13/2016 7:57:00 AM

Anthony, finally someone who puts constructive criticism forward in tune with the reader. Thank you, I need that just as much as encouragement. What I may have meant to express (not too successfully I guess) was that the permutations of logic are often like a multitude of hidden branches and that truths change, yet have a line from acorn to tree. But in any case that message is very hidden and therefore not clear. If you were to read any more of my poems, I would truly appreciate 'positive' negative and intuitive feedback. Thanks again

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2016 5:30:00 AM

you went really deep here... ohh so fine and big congrats, kai..huggs