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To borrow there are rules to be checked to show your father respect You should be real polite which would only be right and to ask his ok is correct. But his son ignored that tradition Used the car on his own volition When involved in a wreck He replied what the heck I’d rather have forgiveness than permission! His son learned the hard way that day That’s all that I need to say He’s one of the fools Who won’t follow the rules In the long run it's him that will pay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/27/2010 4:47:00 PM
A lesson learned I hope. Nice. P.D.
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Date: 3/25/2010 11:37:00 AM
I am so happy to see your poem amongst the ones I am reading today Ralph. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration and hope for a better tomorrow. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2010 9:45:00 AM
Enjoyed the fun to read poem. Like the rhyme, and flow of it.
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Date: 3/24/2010 10:06:00 PM
i would say this is more of a life lesson for a teen. its not even worth the trouble in the end. funny limerick, during the middle stanza. -Always&Forever LYnette
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