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Peridot Renewal

August’s dry winds scorch the landscape While I sit here in the shade of a weeping willow Watching tiny dust devils twirl and spin along the pavement Living heat dances, wavering gently the scenery before my eyes While poppies and gladiolas wither limply on their stem But the peridot sweet, with its pale green color Reminds me instantly of renewing spring As the sun sparks a glitter from this Precious gift I wear on my finger Perhaps or simply perchance It’s why it was chosen This transparent Semiprecious Form of Olivine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/22/2013 4:23:00 PM
Unique and creative winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/21/2013 9:30:00 PM
Debra, Congratulations, with your winning poem. Thank you for supporting my "Green" contest. Always :-) Linda
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Date: 3/8/2013 7:59:00 AM
this is a fantastic poem i love it
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Date: 1/24/2012 6:07:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Debra. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2012 8:58:00 AM
A lovely write with great imagery. I can see you sitting beneath the Willow tree in the heat of the day. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/22/2012 9:54:00 PM
wow, this is such good writing, Debra. I read down here that you didn't enter it in the contest in time. It should have been a winner if it had gotten in on time. Anyway, next time someone does a contest like this, you will have a poem ready!
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Date: 1/22/2012 5:03:00 PM
returning to re-read this lovely one, what a pity it didn't make it into the contest, it's still a winner in my eyes! :-)
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:33:00 PM
Exceptional form and a nice mingle of senses. The sun spark a glimmer of beauty in many a thing, but never so as when tinted in ones own light. I love this, the construction was perfect.
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Date: 1/19/2012 6:56:00 PM
Lovely write thanks for your sweet comments, enjoyed the concept of dust devils SO very unique..nice to meet you welcome! Light & Love
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Date: 1/19/2012 7:50:00 AM
Your way of presentation is so original and beautiful,Debra.Thank you for comments on my poem.Lovingly,FAB
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Date: 1/18/2012 7:35:00 PM
Debra, it has it's beauty.. even the willow makes it happen.. the comfort you need... love evey image in your poem... always,..p.d.
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Date: 1/18/2012 2:47:00 PM
Contest probably filled up..When they fill up they go away so that the person that sponsored them can judge them..Reads like it would have been a winner..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 1/18/2012 4:31:00 PM
Guess I waited too long lol....Oh well, it was an educational experience.
Date: 1/18/2012 2:44:00 PM
excellently composed Debra.. great lines exuding the precious stone.. two of my sons are born in August.. good luck.. winning ways..luv
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Date: 1/18/2012 2:33:00 PM
this is an impressive entry for the contest, I love peridots, a beautiful stone...I don't know what's happening with the contest, it's listed on the winners' page but just says 'winners not chosen'...
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Date: 1/18/2012 11:20:00 AM
contest or not contest - you are number one Debra.Thank you for sweet comment on my poem today.-oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/18/2012 9:54:00 AM
Wow! August ends with Olivine. Wonderfully penned, loved and enjoyed August in January 2012. Thanks for this new one, bl
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Date: 1/18/2012 8:51:00 AM
I enjoyed your peridot poem...good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/18/2012 8:49:00 AM
Well, I wrote this for a members contest, but can't find the contest lol I see it in the blog but not listed under the Members contest link....Oh well...it was educational. I learned about my birthstone, which is a peridot. Soupmail me anyone if you know about the contest??
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