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inspired by Kevin Hurley’s words/mind/heart...

Perhaps not the Mountain - Perhaps even not the lone hermit, atop said mountain... sitting as still as tea leaves, left in their jar. Perhaps not the Mountain. So unneedful of needs. Of deeds. Now moving as imperceptibly, as slowly, as wakefully as the ‘still’ tea leaves, damp on the saucer; unfolding like mornings in morning’s new light. Perhaps not the Mountain. So unmindful of mind. Of mankind. Perhaps not the birds, resting in nooks in rookeries by snow lines and greenlines. Perhaps not the lizard or sheep, one sharp-edged like the low-edges of shiftrock, the other white-topped like lost-edge of the hightop. Perhaps not the leopard, rare as the swear from the hermit; still stretching... out her morning. Perhaps none know the mountain is a slow wave of Earth. A Slow Wave come crashing so slowly into shallower Earth. A great primeval upheaval.

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Date: 9/20/2018 9:33:00 AM
Hello Kevin, as i read this poem I can see the hermit sitting on topof the mountain. alone. Have a nice day my friend.
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Stephe Watson
Date: 9/20/2018 9:38:00 PM
I’ll say hello to Kevin for you. So glad you spent the time to read! :)
Date: 8/22/2018 11:58:00 PM
Kevin’s inspiration did not disappoint.. your write was much enjoyed!
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Stephe Watson
Date: 8/23/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so very much. For your comment and time with the words.
Date: 8/22/2018 9:16:00 PM
talk about time lapse photography... i just 'scanned' a picture...very lovely
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Stephe Watson
Date: 8/23/2018 9:47:00 AM
I hope the picture was as lyric as you! :)

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