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Perfectly Imperfect

All that is beautiful belongs to her soul A natural vivid sense of energy blessed kind An imperfect perfection absolute not a role A brilliance so bright that in fact it blinds Expressed strongly in her belief with harmony Needless conceit for it was not in her nature All craved for the beauty she held ardently Pointless like makeup to her was not major Beautiful vibes blossomed from inside Richest of spirits and a heart so very tender Not good nor bad she had nothing to hide Lived life to its fullest with all of its splendor She was kind Poetry flowing with such grace When she spoke her voice sounded like angels Her essence was as pure as was her face Felt only love for all and for hate contained null Hatred was not within her being For she saw only what was beauty Evil in the world she wasn’t seeing To bring joy to life she felt was her duty Inspired by my youngest Aaliya Marie ….

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Date: 1/31/2022 12:38:00 PM
What an eye-catching title Brenda, with really good rhyme and flow along with nice insightfulness. Hope all's good with you. Blessings always,Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/5/2022 3:39:00 AM
Why thank you Gordon much appreciated!;)
Date: 1/26/2022 4:07:00 AM
What a treasure she is. Children are the best blessing the Lord can ever give us. This is beautiful Brenda. Blessings xxoo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2022 4:40:00 AM
Yes they are Connie the greatest gift of all! Thank you!:)
Date: 1/19/2022 2:55:00 PM
I love both the title and the content, Brenda. Perfectly imperfect is usually applied to those persons who have a lovely character, and it certainly applies to the one who inspired this write. In fact, before I read the footnote, I had a feeling the writer was referring to herself :) ~ Hope you are keeping well, my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2022 12:10:00 AM
Lol! Paul I am as imperfectly imperfect as we all are ! Bug Aaliya has an innocence about her still which makes it even better! Thank you so much !:)
Date: 1/16/2022 7:39:00 PM
Aaliya Marie must be a special angel, Brenda. Enjoyed your reflections on 'Perfect Imperfection!' Hope and Harmony, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2022 12:08:00 AM
A very special Angel at that Gershon thank you!:)
Date: 1/16/2022 1:16:00 PM
You shine with your beautiful lines, Brenda. The innocent that sees no evil, but love, util one day something will happen to change those ideas. Was nice to hear from you. Hugs girl
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2022 12:08:00 AM
Ahh Eve that’s so sweet of you to say! Thank you so much!:)
Date: 1/16/2022 7:53:00 AM
Beautifully said of Aaliya Marie... Lovely write, Brenda. Have a nice Sunday. Hugs Charlie
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2022 12:07:00 AM
Harley thank you so very much!:)
Date: 1/15/2022 11:22:00 PM
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2022 12:07:00 AM
Lol victor I think you got to it before I had to redo it!;)

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