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Perfection

Perfection exists in a most imperfect place. I thank God for you.

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Luke Hobbs
Date: 11/3/2019 11:43:00 PM
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I has that parallel sentence sort of sense to it. Nice balance. I especially like the first 2 lines.
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Valerie Staton
Date: 11/4/2019 8:59:00 AM
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Thanks for reading my work. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Skat A
Date: 12/19/2015 7:00:00 PM
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VALERIE:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year.. Good luck in all you do, just in case I don't stop a second time before the 2015 ends ~SKAT LOVE~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 12/17/2015 4:20:00 AM
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A beautiful haiku and message! Congrats for being featured in the poetrysoup homepage Valerie! ;-)
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/5/2014 9:47:00 AM
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A lovely thought, full wisdom, Valerie
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 9/4/2014 5:44:00 PM
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Nice senryu!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 5:32:00 PM
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lovely haiku glad you have found perfection - you are truly blessed:-) hugs Jan xx
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