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Perfect World

No more pain, 
No more hurt, 
No more building bridges from past heartbreaks, 
That’s the perfect world.

More love, 
More trust, 
More soul, 
More of the perfect world.

Relationships would last longer, 
People would be brought together, 
Friends would laugh together, 
The perfect world in a nutshell.

No more crying, 
Only tears of joy, 
More laughing, 
More fun, 
More love, 
That’s the world of fiction.

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  1. Date: 7/30/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Yep..the world of fiction is and more.Unfortunately reality can be as sour as a lemon at times..but i guess through.those experiences we become stronger and appreciate the sweet short moments.Well penned -Charma : )