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Perfect Universe

Perfect universe I gave her the moon, she handed me the stars and together our love created a perfect universe Ok, slanted Monoku :)

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 9:57:00 PM

Beautiful, Chris. Love should be so grand and so simple.

Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 7:08:00 AM

It should but sadly it hardly ever is. Thank you so much for finding and reading some of my older pieces

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/29/2019 3:04:00 PM

Perfect l!;)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/3/2017 4:29:00 PM

String those monoku pearls together, Chris. I didn't know what to expect when I was enticed by the title to come read this poem. You always deliver the goods though. Warm and thoughtful love poem. May love light your path always.

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 8:09:00 AM

Thanks again my friend for always leaving such kind thoughts for me.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/3/2017 11:25:00 AM

The moon glows so beautifully amongst your stars...Lovely.

Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2017 11:39:00 AM

Thank you sweet Charmaine. I always smile when you stop by.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/30/2016 7:47:00 PM

To me it is not complete, but it is perfect... very nice..

Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 7:47:00 PM

Thanks so very much my friend.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/30/2016 7:30:00 PM

And that, Chris, is definitely a perfect universe! Very nice.

Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 7:57:00 PM

Thanks so very much Dane Ann.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/30/2016 6:54:00 PM

It's me again, Chris, liking your work.

Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 6:55:00 PM

You're always welcome on my page my friend. Thanks so much for your visit.

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/30/2016 6:13:00 PM

A star gazed love affair...a perfect slanted monoku Chris lol...^WW^

Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 6:15:00 PM

Thanks so much Winged Warrior. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/30/2016 5:45:00 PM

oh how beautiful and romantic Chris:-)So few words say so much:-) hugs Jan xx7

Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 6:14:00 PM

Thanks so very much Jan. I'm happy you liked his one.