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Perfect Storm

Funnel clouds like hearts
The wind a passionate kiss
Sweeping them away 

Rainstorm pouring down
Binds the lovers together 
They are a rainbow

Pure as the sea
Two parts of one love
Can they swim forever?

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  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:50:00 PM
    this is so beautiful and creative. congrats for a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:36:00 AM
    congratulations on your win...

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:12:00 PM
    oh, I love this one, many congrats on your win Melani

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 1:56:00 PM
    MELANI, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 12:33:00 PM
    I like this poem lots. Take care, Jancarl

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 1:16:00 PM
    Very, very well written! - I like it a lot!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)