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Perfect Nature

A tree leaning left God's perfect imperfection In the misty dew

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2010 3:08:00 PM

Kimberly, I stumbled upon this amazing haiku in your first poetry page. A Fav for this gem!

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 1/9/2010 9:47:00 PM

Magnificent--Perfect execution. A work of art for the ages.

P Sheart

Date: 9/27/2009 10:56:00 AM

Hi Kimberly What a beautiful scene you paint! So peaceful....Love it! Look forward to reading more of your writing. Thanks for sharing this amazing Haiku with us. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Date: 9/27/2009 9:40:00 AM

What an uplifting view captured in just three lines. I really like this one. Blessings to you for sharing it. Keep on writing! Karen

James Fraser

Date: 9/27/2009 3:45:00 AM

Heavenly Haiku Kimberly, the tree will angle for a reason, probably to gain more light, but no matter the season, it's another of nature's delights >> nice read >> James