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unrhymed tercets which carries a deeply engraved message when we find hope 

Such earthly beauty no painting does justice sewn from the fabric of this planet Adoring jewels blessed by the morning dew cutting stone into diamonds radiating brightly Sweeping priceless over oceans echo's polished whispers Drunken by the spirit holding eternal light captivating mercy one look from the heart becomes dazzled faith enters praying with love in mind It is there looking at a picture finding peace wrapped up inside the temple blessed once found to never let you go again makes everything worth it

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Date: 10/21/2019 5:29:00 AM
"faith enters praying with love in mind " A lovely line here...
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Date: 10/20/2019 8:58:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 +7+7!A Fav!You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot that you're okay in all, Liam.Please keep positive n' very strong!Always keeping you in my heart ,thoughts ,n' prayers.Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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