Perfect Embrace

Your perfect embrace A deep heart of wondrous warmth Gleam reaching our eyes Russell Sivey

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/29/2012 7:19:00 PM

Oh yes,....it's ALL in the LOOK, isn't it? I had to see if you wrote for this one..I had a poem in my mind when I went to sleep this morning from work..then as I woke up it sounded like a cheesy song...I just thot that the greatest romance occurs on one's wedding day...you captured some lovin' here too I see!! Thanks for always being an encourager, Russell..YOu must be Norman Vincent Peale's offspring!! :) Gwendolen

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/29/2012 7:44:00 AM

I diGG what you did, when ya did what did with this one ...Ya Digg? How come some of the best poems don't get near enough dang reads? That happens to me more than it doesnt....I need to be more Soup proactive though! 7up and a fave Russell!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/27/2012 3:04:00 PM

just spotted this one! you really excel at these romantic senryus, a warm and enticing read...