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Perfect After All

A glorious day in the playground, My grandson by my side, Seemed perfect but, in life, you know, Perfection’s oft denied. So walking home I noticed that An earring’d disappeared, A loss most likely permanent, Or that was what I feared. I twice went back, retraced my steps, Looked under slides and swings And tried to find the calm Which resignation often brings. Though days have passed, I thought I’d search Just one more time in case My missing earring would show up, An ending I’d embrace. So take a guess and you’ll be right – I found it on the ground, Beside the slide and where a million Footprints can be found. It isn’t shiny so it was A miracle for sure. To toddlers, birds and squirrels It had negative allure. But looking back upon that day, It felt just like a dream. Perfection, after all, Is more at hand than it may seem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/3/2015 5:25:00 PM
G'day Ilene... this is a beaut poem to read Ilene. Flows along with a simple personal topic that we can all relate to at some stage in life. Thank you Ilene - Lindsay
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Date: 4/3/2015 11:08:00 AM
Like the lost coin. His parables were told about things to which we could all relate. He has given us every chance to believe in him as the Son of God. Thanks for this, Ilene. I loved it.
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Date: 4/3/2015 7:19:00 AM
Something like that can make a person happier than winning the lottery! Love the way you presented it. // Happy Easter, Ilene. // paul
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Date: 4/2/2015 10:00:00 PM
Interesting one. Maybe it was not glittery enough for those birds and squirrels!! I was thinking maybe your grandson had tucked it away somewhere. haha!!
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Date: 4/2/2015 7:46:00 PM
Oh Ilene someone was looking after you - how wonderful you found it again:-) Hugs jan xx
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