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Entering the heart of a flower Under the thunder moon Striking arrow head Sweetly touching angel Your starlight shines through Within radiant thoughts Warmly sailing away with the setting sunshine tenderness Rising your smile golden delicious Kisses the very dewdrops Each a living memory signals fates bounty Goodmorning daylight vision sweetest rose blooms Petals breathless whispers Softly inside enchantingly beautiful daybreak a promise through colour you hold the limelight supreme

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Akkina Downing

Date: 11/11/2016 6:21:00 PM

Liam, I have to say you are the poet of romance! My gush, do you have a book of them I can enjoy holding and reading them away? Lol! Sweetness!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/20/2016 8:07:00 AM

- Beautiful and romantic, my friend Liam - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 7/18/2016 8:15:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^