Perfect

Broken emotions Bruised hearts and egos Silent screams of desperate pleas Suffocating lungs Tear stained faces Sharp blades shooting from beautiful lips Cold beds and sleepless nights Lost to a dark future Restrained from a darker past Smiling through the pain A love so dark it shines A pain so deep, it’s soothing Emotions so strong, they’re controlling A love so unconditional, it will be forever binding A person so flawed, they’re perfect.

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/5/2016 12:53:00 AM

Nice first post. Wish a successful journey ahead..........hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2016 8:23:00 PM

Jessica,,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jessica Rogers
Date: 4/4/2016 8:58:00 PM

Thank you. I have been reading yours since i signed up. Your name shows up everywhere! Love your work.

Jessica Rogers
Date: 4/4/2016 8:45:00 PM

I would love that. Thank you! Its been years since i have written. Found some inspiration today for some reason. Everyone has been so accepting here. I feel home!

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/4/2016 8:21:00 PM

A most haunting write Jessica & welcome to PS from another new member, well its been a month I think !

Jessica Rogers
Date: 4/4/2016 8:45:00 PM

Thanks again Lenny. I cant wait to read some of yours.