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<> i am a perfectionist but i am completely incapable of perfection like most i don't have many happy accidents i am burdened by flaws, by failure, by folly but i am not bound by fate to lose, but to negotiate and learn from missed cues my diffused bomb won't blow your mind but in time you will question why i threw it i am a perfectionist but completely incapable of perfection like most i don't have many happy accidents <>

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Date: 7/3/2012 9:08:00 PM
THis is Awesome!! I love how you inserted the first lines back into the ending. Great emphasis of your message. For myself, I would only change that first line: I am not a great perfectionist!! However in writing I very much try to be, and I can see that you are too!
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Date: 7/3/2012 9:06:00 PM
I love how you said I had a "sweet relationship with words" Let me look this one over now!!
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