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Beneath the maple I lye in shade. Relished in thoughts of love. Looked toward the sky and found my heaven. For I wait no more. Hovered over my face. I hear my husbands' voice. It is clear to me now. All I needed was him. Oh' glorious day,let our secluded picnic begin. ''Picnic Contest'' sponsored by...Carol Brown written by...Kacey Greenlee kaceymike29

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/20/2011 11:36:00 PM
Very nice, Kacey. Congrats on the HM
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Date: 5/19/2011 10:08:00 AM
Excellent poem, Kaycee. I love the way the sound of your husband's voice makes your picnic complete. Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:23:00 PM
Congrats on your HM:)
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:09:00 PM
Kacey, good to see you Honorably Mentioned with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:51:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Kacey. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:12:00 AM
My congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, kacey
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:20:00 AM
Congrats Kacey on your HM in the picnic contest with this delightful write.. keep entering the contests and u will continue to be noticed my friend.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Kacey. Love, Carol
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