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She was a 10 At my favorite pub and a few shots of gin Heads turned as she walked in Dolly’s blonde sister, a perfect 10 I played my cards and played them right She left with me that spring night Up to her apartment we did go Off came the wig she gave it a throw Not so fine, maybe a nine Out of the mouth came her upper plate Oh gosh! Not even an eight Away when the dress I could see more She had bought those forty-four D's at a store Five at the most was her score Eyelashes, contacts, and makeup removed revealed a face I was so scared I was looking for my mace It was when her girdle hit the floor I couldn't stand it and ran out the door Back to the pub I've never been Because a 10 is not always a win © 7/20/2015

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Date: 7/20/2015 4:26:00 PM
A funny one Eve....beauty is more than skin deep and what you see is not always what you get.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/20/2015 4:29:00 PM
Haha.... few drinks under the belt makes a big difference not only in looks but feelings. Hugs dear friend

Book: Shattered Sighs