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Perception while djinnis cackle I craft poetry in this room with both hands tied I compose on white walls with an imaginary blue pen Copyright © Darren White July 27, 2018

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Date: 10/2/2018 2:18:00 AM
Phew, a rubber padded cell. But the blue marker rules in a way. Your painting with the pen always strikes me as so powerful. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 8/15/2018 4:45:00 AM
congratulations!Loved your poem.Have a great day!
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Date: 7/29/2018 9:27:00 PM
I am doing much better my friend. My new knee is hurting less and less. It has been three months since I had it replaced. I finally feel like writing poetry again. Congrats again....Keep well. xxoo
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Date: 7/29/2018 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. :)
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Date: 7/29/2018 3:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan :)
Date: 7/29/2018 8:14:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Darren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/29/2018 3:03:00 PM
Ha, Anne-Lise, so good to see you. I hope you are doing well :)
Date: 7/29/2018 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Darren with your amazing poem, so pleased to know you are ok my friend. :))
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Date: 7/29/2018 3:02:00 PM
Thank you Roy, yes I am still around, alive and kicking :) I hope you are doing well!
Date: 7/29/2018 3:01:00 AM
Had to look up djinnis, can picture the scene now, I can see how you inspired Arthur. Congrats on POTD. Tom
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 3:02:00 PM
Djinni-genie :) Yes, and I did inspire him. Thank you!
Date: 7/28/2018 4:46:00 PM
I was just thinking about you yesterday and hoping you are well. It is wonderful to read your work again. Welcome back! Congratulations on POTD my friend! : )
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Darren White
Date: 7/28/2018 11:56:00 PM
Hi Connie. I am still around, but I don't post my work here very much. That is because I wish to send them in for publication, most of them anyways. And when they are on PS, they are considered published, and that means I cannot send them in anymore. I'm okay my friend, how are you doing?
Date: 7/28/2018 3:27:00 PM
Hello Darren, Congratulation on POTD!! A very "perceptive" write -- no pun intended!! Superbly Done!! Cheers, Gary
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Darren White
Date: 7/28/2018 11:56:00 PM
Thank you Gary :) Also very perceptive of you!
Date: 7/28/2018 1:48:00 PM
My Dear Friend - when did you return?? This is perfect for Poem of the Day, and the day after mine ... hmmm, perhaps the Universe is speaking, as I don't believe in coincidence. I remember times of illness and writing on the ceiling, but always in imaginary red, dripping in my eye, (fits me, doesn't it?). Blessings, Buddy - I pray you are well - the collab will happen! ;-) <3
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Darren White
Date: 7/28/2018 11:58:00 PM
Greg, I have never been away, but hardly ever post poems, because I am sending my poetry in for publication mostly, that's why. But I am still around. Just email, you know? ;)
Date: 7/28/2018 11:49:00 AM
Returning with congratulations, Darren, on your excellent and well deserved POTD honors for your creative and beautifully expressed poem. Profound poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Darren White
Date: 7/28/2018 11:59:00 PM
Thanks Susan! So nice to see you :)
Date: 7/28/2018 11:24:00 AM
And always do it so wonderfully. Small verses but huge message that just touches the reader. Very nice my friend
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:00:00 AM
O hai there my friend :) Good you like this one!
Date: 7/28/2018 10:38:00 AM
Wonderful write, Darren, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:00:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve :)
Date: 7/28/2018 9:46:00 AM
Your imaginary blue pen is writing on my walls lol...Congrats!!! Darren on your POTD!...may you continue to drip blue oceans of poetry, my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:00:00 AM
My oceans will be deep blue, thanks WW :)
Date: 7/28/2018 9:41:00 AM
You've got your mind right Darren, congratulations...
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:01:00 AM
Thank you Charlie :)
Date: 7/28/2018 9:20:00 AM
Many congratulations to you on your poem being chosen as POTD, it is indeed a beauty
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:01:00 AM
Thanks Faraz, I checked your poems, I love them!
Date: 7/28/2018 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations Darren, Great Poem !!
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:02:00 AM
Thank you Mike :)
Date: 7/28/2018 8:33:00 AM
Yaaaay!! You're back, at long last... As long as it's a padded poetry cell, ( where some of us find a voice for our quirky, craziness, ) it's good...And, as usual, you remain in top form....love this! ( Please can we have some more? ((((BIG HUGS)))
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:03:00 AM
Hehe, no, I am here but won't post much. That's because I send in most of my poems for publication :)
Date: 7/28/2018 8:15:00 AM
A poem floating in the imagination...Congrats on POTD Darren
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph :)
Date: 7/28/2018 7:40:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Darren. Well done.
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:04:00 AM
Thank you Warren :)
Date: 7/28/2018 7:02:00 AM
Yay! Congratulations my friend <3
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:04:00 AM
Hugs, Ma Mo :)
Date: 7/28/2018 6:49:00 AM
Excellent poetry--congrats Darren on poem of the day.
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:04:00 AM
Thanks Vijay :)
Date: 7/28/2018 6:13:00 AM
...and you do it well Darren
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:05:00 AM
Thanks John :)
Date: 7/28/2018 5:57:00 AM
Many congrats, Darren on your POTD...you should pop up here more often...well done! Charlie
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:05:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, I do my best.
Date: 7/28/2018 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations Darren on the POTD!!! <3 :D
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Darren White
Date: 7/29/2018 12:06:00 AM
Thanks my friend :)
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