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Perceived Gaze Concord (Crystalline) (Edit)

Mystery discreetly disclosed. Changing moods reveal details of shades edit Designed by nature with a clue, Watchful minds eye, will break the venue. edit Blended aspiring deployment, Thine story so brightly depicted.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/1/2009 8:15:00 PM
Tyhank you all for reading and commenting and Thank You Brian for holding this contest,The story behind this piece I thought I woul let everyone know,,,,... I have Hazel eyes but they also change colors. from grenn to blue especially at special times. Thank You all again,,,Blessings >>cecil
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Intervals contest!
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:12:00 PM
Cecil, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on this divine poem...so inspirational and serene! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 9/30/2009 10:19:00 AM
Interesting perspective for the reader to ponder about. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 9/30/2009 7:11:00 AM
Dear Cecil, Congratulation on your well deserved win in Brian's contest. Love lainie
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Date: 9/30/2009 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Cecil. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:03:00 AM
Congrats on you success in my contest Cecil.Rgds Brian My latest contest Five&Twenty is now open
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Date: 9/10/2009 5:46:00 PM
I love the first line...it's almost seductive! Good luck with this experiment of Brians! Thank you also for your lovely comments. ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/10/2009 9:32:00 AM
Wishing you the best Cecil. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2009 11:53:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my experiment Cecil.Rgds Brian
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