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People say rain is the crying of God, but I say different I say the rain is the crying of humanity, The emotions that are stored, but never released, Shattering the atmosphere in the only way that people will notice. The rain enters people’s lives and makes them listen, Even when the emotions they hold never did. The pounding drops on the windowsill Splattering with such force and power: Angry, hateful words that were swallowed Pent up beneath the surface, until they evaporated Turned from a human body to a barrage of sound. We are afraid of that rain, and we run inside. The softly falling rain, The kind you cant notice unless you see the marks on the ground Or you hold our your hand and wait for the slightest touch of moisture Those are the happy tears. The tears of the woman who sees her officer come home And the tears of the boy who never thought He would be important to anyone, until he was told: “But you are everything.” We dance in that rain, because nothing is more beautiful, Than the lightest drops of water, caressing your skin As you look up to the sky, or you dance, Because we are happy. And then there is the everyday rain. Not a pour, not a drizzle, but a rain, Where you pull up your hood or hide under an umbrella We hide from those drops, because we pretend that They do not exist. That rain is sad, grey, mocking: It is the lover leaving, and the one holding in the urge To beg them to stay It is the daughter packing her bag, and the mother pretending That she is perfectly fine with the absence After eighteen years of hearing her patter down the stairs everyday. We do not want to feel that rain, because it reminds us too much of tears, As it slides down our face, or soaks us slowly It is everything we want to forget.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/10/2016 1:33:00 AM
Kaitlin Addison, nice To see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 7/7/2015 1:01:00 PM
Hi Kaitlin, this is a wonderful write. Enjoyed dropping by to read. Love SKAT
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Date: 8/14/2014 10:28:00 PM
Kaitlin, :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 8/3/2014 6:50:00 PM
Deep piece which I enjoyed reading. Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings!
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Date: 8/1/2014 11:34:00 PM
Powerful, inspirational write! Welcome to PoetrySoup, Kaitlin!
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Date: 7/29/2014 4:16:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Kaitlin :) - I choose your first very well written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/28/2014 1:17:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Kaitlin. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/28/2014 11:24:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Your writing is touching and unique. Keep writing... You have talent. If you click on a name or picture it will take you to that persons' poems. If you comment on their poems there will be a link so they can find your poems. Good writing.
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Date: 7/27/2014 9:17:00 PM
My daughter says the same Kaitlin, I enjoyed your message. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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