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People Love a Parade

Parades prepared for pleasure and pageantry. Phalanx of performers pound the pavement; percussion sets the pace; piccolos lead. Princes and princesses pass by on floats; painted clowns pantomime, making kids smile Patient pedestrians peddle their wares while policemen patrol the streets for problems. Patrons and parents pack the parking spots peeling their eyes for a parader they know. Politicians pitch peppermints and promises. Parades leave us pleased but played-out. written March 27, 2018 contest: Silent One's, Alliteration

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Date: 4/3/2018 9:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Reason, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2018 7:40:00 AM
I agree with Judith. Many congrats.
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Date: 4/2/2018 7:44:00 PM
Wow Reason! Amazing alliteration here. Such an interesting take on the theme of the contest. It must have been a challenge to come up with so many "P" words! Congrats on your win!! Best, Judy
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Date: 12/3/2023 2:17:00 AM
I use OneLook Dictionary a lot and RhymeZone of course. thanks Judy for the congratulations and comment.
Date: 4/2/2018 8:41:00 AM
Love the line: Politicians pitch peppermints and promises. Congrats!
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Date: 4/1/2018 9:18:00 PM
Wow ... Countless P pleasantly occupied with producing the perfect pageantry ... Congratulations on your nice win ...
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:16:00 PM
An awesome alliteration, Reason. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes..
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:48:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, I'm also pleased with the placement. Glad for the caring comment. Have a great tomorrow.
Date: 4/1/2018 3:27:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, R.A.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:03:00 PM
thanks, Anne-Lise, glad for the read and welcome your reply.
Date: 4/1/2018 2:47:00 PM
An extensive use of alliteration, you did really well to use so many words with P.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:54:00 PM
I am awed that you did not dismiss it on grounds of overuse of one-letter alliteration, Silent One. It flows better than some I've written. Thank you for the placement.
Date: 3/28/2018 7:00:00 AM
Awesome alliteration..all lines begin with the same letter..bets for a win, RAP.
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Date: 3/29/2018 8:24:00 PM
Appreciate your accolades, Vijay.. Thank you so much.

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