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Penned Promises

Penned Promises I will give to you a bouquet of words more fragrant than the flowers I will choose each one specifically from the silence of the bowers. Imbue them with a lover’s touch, kiss them with such passion as to make the pages blush at words written in this fashion. Each petal-word fine wound to stem will carry love’s lament that it is now unable to bask in your sweet scent, hold to you in outstretched hand penned promises on white to guide us through these distant days and dreams to ease us through the night. 7/14/2014 contest – A Poem in Paradise” sponsor – Isaiah Zerbst

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Date: 7/29/2014 12:18:00 PM
John,, :) Congratulations, on your winning poem... Love Linda
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Date: 7/23/2014 8:48:00 PM
Beautiful, I love it, congrats to you, John. R K
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John Lawless
Date: 7/24/2014 7:15:00 AM
thanks R K
Date: 7/23/2014 4:31:00 PM
John :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/23/2014 12:33:00 PM
lovely write and a worthy winner. hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2014 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Jan, for checking in.
Date: 7/23/2014 9:13:00 AM
Lovely and romantic...even "the pages blush"! Congratulations, John; this is a much deserved win. // paul
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2014 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Paul, as always, for your support.
Date: 7/23/2014 8:24:00 AM
Big congrats on your fine win my friend!!!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2014 4:14:00 PM
thank you for reading and commenting
Date: 7/23/2014 8:22:00 AM
Lovely piece, congratulations.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2014 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Richard
Date: 7/23/2014 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations to you John for your great win which is well-deserved. This is such a beautiful romantic write - just lovely. Warmest regards!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2014 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Pandita for your kind words.
Date: 7/23/2014 6:30:00 AM
Penned promises on white!.. Genius!.. Congrats on a great win, John my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2014 4:10:00 PM
Thanks Arlene
Date: 7/23/2014 5:32:00 AM
A very wonderful write John,, elegant words ,,and promises penned,, loved this one !congrats on huge win!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2014 4:10:00 PM
Thanks your support is always appreciated Dr. Sharma
Date: 7/22/2014 8:41:00 AM
will someone pls give me a bouquet of words? crazy beautiful write :)
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John Lawless
Date: 7/22/2014 9:13:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting. always appreciated
Date: 7/21/2014 10:35:00 PM
John, a beautiful gift, indeed. Your words, paint and print the perfect bouquet of words. I enjoyed the imagery, in a dreamy kind of way. Awesome poem, LINDA
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John Lawless
Date: 7/22/2014 9:13:00 AM
Thank you PD, always nice to have a bouquet tossed my way.

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