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Penitence

Penance A thousand souls queue outside his confessional while he scans the cards of sins. How many Hail Marys, Our Fathers, rosaries will be dealt today? Wisely dispensed devotions from behind the brown curtain, the shadow grid, will part God’s pearly gates for a penitent multitude. I’m at the back of the line and worry I’ll not make it to the booth in time. ©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins April 21, 2012

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Date: 2/4/2017 4:06:00 PM
Like the second verse, Louis.
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Date: 5/10/2012 11:47:00 AM
You put us right at the scene and create such a profound atmosphere. Well done, Kathryn! Keith
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Date: 5/3/2012 4:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading ..I have wondered how confessional actually worked since that is not my faith..Interesting one explaining how it is done...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2012 2:24:00 PM
I'm sure you have much less to confess than those in front of you, so, relax and write some more good poetry. Love, daver
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 5/14/2012 8:04:00 AM
Ya think?
Date: 4/22/2012 10:19:00 PM
I like this a lot! There is more meaning underneath the words and I love that about this poem... Thanks for your nice comments on my poetry, it means a lot! :)
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Date: 4/21/2012 9:56:00 AM
Wonderful concentration! Thanks, Paula
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Date: 4/21/2012 9:51:00 AM
Very nice Free Verse Light & Love
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