Penetrates

... . Light rays penetrates Son comes to the water, shore . . Bringing gold to stony earth

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/29/2010 4:11:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Sara! I borrowed from our library a book with translated Japanese Haiku ---I do love those!!! 32 years ago I met a Japanese (Ichi) who also wrote poetry, a very nice guy and a pity that I lost his address. Have a happy Easter and thank you for your comments...Gert

John Freeman

Date: 3/25/2010 5:38:00 PM

I certainly agree with this penetrating light. And that little bird, that tells us of Agape, lit upon his sholders when he came out of the waters. Awesome, Job,Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/25/2010 11:48:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku Sara and if for the new contest ..much good luck.. like the way u set this one up also ..it expounds on the words to penetrate the mind..luv.. Linda-Marie

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/25/2010 7:58:00 AM

very nice loved it faleshia

Nick Bagnall

Date: 3/25/2010 6:01:00 AM

Your peom creates a beautiful image in my mind - Thank you

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/25/2010 5:48:00 AM

enjoyed today...keep sharing