Penalty

PENALTY This desert- sands dust heat Mind narrow and fettered Tagged with God's penalty ©rajat kanti chakrabarty 09 December, 2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/10/2014 8:48:00 AM

SO much content...meaning in few words, Rajat! Excellent write...hugs, Rhonda

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/10/2014 10:13:00 AM

Thank you Rhonda. Hugs! xxxx rajat

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2014 9:31:00 AM

I am thinking very good metaphors..We do get in those desert places at times..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/9/2014 9:42:00 AM

Thank you Sara. You are a lovely poet. I like your style very much.Hugs! ...rajat

David Meade

Date: 12/9/2014 9:30:00 AM

Barren and dry you will be .... thus is your destiny!! Oh, if we could understand the mind of God!! Well, maybe not!! Nicely done dear lovely friend.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/9/2014 9:49:00 AM

Just imagine David some lizards thrive in desert only.They can squeeze out best from God's penalty. But we humans are so blunt that we throw down God's well chosen gifts.Love XXX rajat