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Pegasus,Take Me There

Winged horse bright,star studded my dreams fly with you tonight light years beyond this starry sky Pegasus,take me there. Night sky a tinselled cloak, unveiling it on your wings a journey among twinkling stars nearer to God's home. ===========000=========== Contest:Pen a Pensee Sponsor:Nette Onclaud By:kash poet Date: 7th July 2012

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/21/2012 9:16:00 AM

Wow, Kash! A beautiful sky, you penned. Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2012 4:26:00 PM

((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Deborah Burch

Date: 7/18/2012 2:52:00 PM

OOOHHH!!! Kash, I love this...it has to be a fav....Well Done....Big Congrats on your win...love ya, deb

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/18/2012 8:58:00 AM

You took me home with this starlight beauty, dear Kash! Congratulations!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/18/2012 8:35:00 AM

you hit me with this tender write, kashi buddy!.. congrats on your win in my contest!.. awwright!..:) huggs!

Sidney Beck

Date: 7/18/2012 7:27:00 AM

lovely job, .......well done and congrats Kash....best wishes

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/18/2012 6:03:00 AM

Smashing write Kash, Congratulations xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2012 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations on you win in Nette's "Pen A Pensee" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2012 5:05:00 AM

super congrats Kash luv on an exciting win for this marvelous write on my favorite horse Pegasus for Pensee.. always a shining piece my friend..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/16/2012 7:05:00 PM

Got to love a flying horse I saw Clash of the Titans and they did a great job with Pegasus. Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/11/2012 7:41:00 PM

You gave this poem wings, Kash!! Just a lovely poem for the contest!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2012 11:57:00 AM

wow, Kash, you took the theme and style of form and did a wonderful poem. I am impressed! For me it was a bit hard to do. I especially like that first stanza.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/7/2012 5:04:00 PM

Wow, this is REALLY well crafted...made me want to go visit the stars. Reads like a sure winner! - Tim

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/7/2012 5:01:00 PM

Great work, Kash! Beautiful imagery in this. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim (putting this in my favs.)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2012 4:33:00 PM

Great expressive and descriptive work...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Terry O'Leary

Date: 7/7/2012 2:00:00 PM

Very nice imagery (as usual!).. Good luck in the contest... I'm sure you'll place at the top... Terry

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/7/2012 12:51:00 PM

‡ Your Welcome Beautiful Kashie * Twas & Is A Joy, My Luv, Rachel ‡

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/7/2012 12:42:00 PM

What a fantastic write Kash! I really enjoyed your creativity you have penned here! You will do well in the contest my friend! Great Work!!

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/7/2012 12:38:00 PM

‡ Enchanting In Fairytalistic Beauty * Love The Inspirations Tones As Also The Of Pegasus * Lovely, My Luv, Rachel ‡

Tanya Harrington

Date: 7/7/2012 12:37:00 PM

Wow! Beautiful Kash! A winner for sure. :) Tanya

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/7/2012 11:51:00 AM

Beautiful Kash, the imagery is wonderful and I know this will be in the winner's circle!