Peepers

Late at night they come out Making noises they shout. The peepers are now out.

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/15/2011 6:22:00 PM

Great form and write my poet friend.... they did email me back and now I have to put together Manuscript... thanks for all your advice and for you....luv Michael

Jack Horne

Date: 8/15/2011 3:29:00 PM

Intriguing piece, Cory. I wonder if there are peepers in my neighbourhood, LOL

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2011 2:52:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this creative work...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2011 2:51:00 PM

Lol~ how are u? Great to be stopping by... dont know if u got my mail. Been on one night and nothing got done but a few comments. Also i have had the worse case of trying to post a comment... today it took me long to log in.. others times i would of gave up.... nice form here.. take care, p.d.~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/13/2011 7:38:00 PM

Thanks for the entry if for the contest, cory

Gary Fields

Date: 8/13/2011 4:36:00 PM

AH1 This is very scary stuff! I don't know if I can handle this..... Clear, concise and to the point.... The making of a great poet, uh! I mean Peeper! So knock them out,,, your friend in the pen/G,FIELDS

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/13/2011 4:02:00 PM

seems like the night creatures are out, cory... impressive images.. winning wishes; huggs!.. nette