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Peek a Boo

Etched between two pines shaven mountain crest Beneath benchmarker lined tombstones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/20/2010 10:32:00 AM
Wow! This is an awesome poem! Wonderful use of imagery. It was so good to hear from you--thank you for your kind comment. Hope life is treating you kindly. Have a good weekend. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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Date: 3/15/2010 1:14:00 AM
Katherine thanks for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/15/2010 12:21:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Constance.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/14/2010 9:14:00 AM
Awesome Katherne. I'll have to try one of these Monoku forms sometime. Per your comment on "Nano Uno" I don't think we have near as much to fear from these paranormal visitors, as we do from our own misguided understanding of their intention. Their intention toward us is Agape, I'm convienced.Smile! Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/14/2010 1:52:00 AM
Death is everywhere. The death of a child is especially difficult. Nice write. And thank you, Katherine, for your most welcomed recent comments on my “Whether in Your Neck of the Woods” blog. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/13/2010 11:45:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Katherine.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/13/2010 11:32:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Katherine.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/13/2010 7:08:00 AM
Amazingly vivid imagery in this poem, Katherine. The reader can really see it just as you describe. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2010 6:07:00 AM
Interesting write...Keep the creative pen flowing.. Sara
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