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Pebbles

there are many times when i find myself barefoot in my backyard walking through the grass with no shoes on and i can smell the neighbors burning their morning waffles into hard pieces of rock because their waffle maker has been broken for three months now and they can't get a new one because they need to save up for a good preschool for little abigail who is turning 3 soon and i can tell this story in my head every morning when i find myself in my backyard barefoot walking through the grass. and sometimes i find myself in a bad dream and the waffles that were burned to a rock have turned into hot pebbles that burn my feet as i walk across them barefoot and the neighbors never got that new waffle maker so every morning they have to feed little abigail burnt breakfast and she never got into the nice preschool because she can't read correctly and years later they find out its because she has dyslexia and the poetry she is going to write will be words no one can scribe and she lives in her little world alone and every morning she walks to school barefoot on hot pebbles because the waffle maker is still broken. and when i get dreams like this it is good for me to go into my backyard and listen to the conversations my neighbors have and its good to hear abigail's father read stories to her and its good to walk barefoot and not feel pebbles.

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Date: 5/23/2017 7:19:00 PM
look up the Scottish Rite organization to see if they are in your city or town. They offer FREE phenomenal weekly tutoring using the gold standard method of teaching and aiding dyslexic readers (Orton Gillingham method). I have a dyslexic son and I also used to tutor with them. Free if you have a formal diagnoses of dyslexia. (register with your school to get that testing done) You may have to get on their waiting list but is well worth it. Will give you great skills and self confidence galore!
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Date: 8/9/2016 12:39:00 AM
M. WILLOW , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 8/6/2016 3:52:00 PM
M Willow, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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