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Pearls On the Caladiums

Pearls hang on the Caladiums Swirls of fog and rain from the night Twirls that flow to the very edge Earls no more blessed than I with this right Heat will soon evaporate the dew Treat short lived but the memory Sweet lingers relieves stress of day Greet this day appreciatory Contest: Lento Poetry Sponsor:^Rick Parise Thanks for the challenge

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Date: 8/2/2011 10:18:00 AM
did rob tell you stretch killed my roster??
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:17:00 AM
pretty work you have penned. enjoyed!!
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Date: 7/30/2011 8:15:00 PM
A lovely poem here Sara...enjoyed.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 7/30/2011 6:21:00 PM
a very vivid picture Sara and nice use of new form..good luck in the contest luv...thankxx for s.m. info..will check some of them out luv..
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Date: 7/30/2011 3:19:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Sara
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Date: 7/30/2011 2:18:00 PM
Beautiful write as usual...God bless...old Jack
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Date: 7/30/2011 1:58:00 PM
What a lovely image of the dewdrops on the caladiums, Sara. Very uplifting message in this excellent entry for Rick's contest. Wishing you success. As for my grandmother -- that poem was hard to write because it is true. We later learned my grandfather had married another woman before my grandmother, so Dad and his sister were illegitimate. Love, Carolyn (Been having trouble opening Soup Mail)
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Date: 7/30/2011 12:56:00 PM
such words of life's celebration, sara.. i am enhhralled..a winning delight for me..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/30/2011 12:37:00 PM
Nicely done. I wish you luck in the contest! xoxo Robert.
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Date: 7/30/2011 12:03:00 PM
Wonderful imagery! This was not an easy poetry form. Good job my friend! Caryl
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